Template talk:Motd/2018-10-16 (en)

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The current caption doesn't seem to use standard English:

This animation show the grape harvest by machine. We can see how the machine go on the vine collecting the grapes. We can see inside the machine how work.

It should say something a bit more like:

This animation shows a mechanical grape harvest. The harvester moves along the vine, collecting the grapes, before the internals of the harvester working are shown.

GKFXtalk 10:52, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

A shiver ran down my spine when I read it, but alas – today it cannot be improved by ordinary users :( Richard 12:01, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
✓ Done Sorry it took so long. Main page things like this should probably be reported to a more visible area in the future so that they are taken care of immediately. --Majora (talk) 22:04, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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